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It's just a story I'm writing for my girlfriend because she has trouble sleeping so something to help her sleep

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Sorry for all the mistakes and yes my girlfriends name is rebecca and yes I’m josh. its incomplete too, but i’m doing this because my girlfriend has a hard time sleeping so i thought a bedtime story would be good for her to fall asleep- this all written by your friend Oak :]

Once upon a time, in a place very far away, a place very similar but very different from ours; there lived an evil prince who was very bored with his life. He had conquered many different lands with his vast army and his two knights that were suits of armor that had their own personalities, the suit were made to move on their own and have feelings. His black armor Atoli had always had a fondness for the prince and his white armor Gene was gentle and very devoted to the prince, they both would do anything for the prince but the prince often neglected their feelings. One day the prince called upon his knights and asked them for a very odd favor, “ My knights you have always been by my side, and now I asked this of you, I have seen everything in this world and have conquered everything. I ask this of you, travel through space and find me a new world to conquer and report to me anything that is unusual.” The Knights agreed and took to the skies they flew on their wings made of metal through the vastness of space scouring the edges of the universe in search of life. All hope seemed lost but then they came upon a blue planet, they both agreed this was the planet that events would unfold and change everything forever. The Knights flew down on their metal wings and as they descended the inhabitants of the planet gasp in awe and in terror. The planet was filled with joyful screams and screams of terror but they knight did not understand the mixture of emotions. As the knights descended onto the terrain it seemed like time had stood still the once cheering and terror had turned into frozen stares. “This planet looks friendly I don’t think it should be involved in the princes plans” said Gene. Atoli just stood still and observed the inhabitants for a few seconds. She then spoke softly to Gene “We would have to see if this planet would be ideal for the princes plans, the prince has ordered us to find a planet to conquer and to observe it for anything unusual. This has been the only planet we have found with sentient life we should observe it more and see if its worthy for our prince.” Gene being a bit uneasy with decision agreed to it, he then remarked “If you deem it unworthy what then?” Atoli thought about this for a second then spoke “ We would have to travel to more locations to find something more worthy for our prince”. Gene then spoke out to the crowd of people who had gathered in this terrain filled with large structures “ We are the princes loyal knights we are here to observe you and see if this planet is worthy enough for our prince to stand on”. The crowd of people then erupted with questions, they yelled questions that weren’t understandable to the knight questions like “Are you Angels!” or “Were you made in China or Russia or are you from here!”. The knights told the crowd that they would answer their questions as soon as they could ask some of their own first. The crowd fell silent and with that Gene began to speak “ Where are we, where have we landed what is this strange land who are you people.” The crowd began to speak all at once, Atoli in a booming voice told them to quite down and pointed to an individual in the crowd she said “You! You will speak for them in this conversation anyone who interrupted will have to deal with me” Atoli’s black armor shined in the sunlight and made her more frightening to the inhabitants for some reason. Gene spoke again “You! Answer the questions I have asked”. The Individual stepped forward from the crowd he stared at Atoli and Gene these two god-like figures in front of him watching his every movement. “what is your name sir?” Atoli said in a soft voice while approaching him. The man quaking in fear at the site of Atoli managed to utter his name “My name is…um its George madam”. Atoli slowly approached the man her steps so soft they didn’t make a noise in her armor. “My name is Atoli, me and my partner Gene come from a place very far in the stars, our prince has set us on an expedition to seek out new lands and to observe its inhabitants”. A smile came across Georges face “We welcome you to our planet with open arms and our planet earth seek a friendly relationship with you and your prince”. Atoli froze for a second something was not right, She turned around to look at Gene, he nodded they both had noticed it now. People in black had been on the top of these structures looking at them through black scopes on a piece of metal. A booming voice came out of nowhere “This is the LA Police department put your hands up where we can see them!” Atoli turned and asked George what was the meaning of this, George quickly replied “They think your enemies you have to do what they say”. “No one but my prince tells me what to do!” “ But madam if you don’t comply with them they will have to resort to force.” “Just let them try if they do that I will not hold back!” Atoli glanced over at Gene he had been still, he had not moved a single inch he had already spotted the men on the roof and was seeing what their next action would be. “This is the police department put your hands up or we will have to open fire!” The crowd erupted in cries of no. Gene glanced down at Atoli who was still next to George he knew what was coming and had his own plan of what was going to happen after this event. “That was your last warning! Men open fire!”. The men on the roof opened fire on Atoli and Gene but the bullets bounce off their armor. Gene stared at Atoli and Atoli looked back at him. Gene’s wings opened up and he quickly took into the sky and flew north. Gene knew she would be ok he just didn’t want to see what was to come. Atoli wings opened up like an angel she floated in the sky, she slowly pulled out a black sword and flew to the first person on the roof. She stabbed the man through the chest, he pleaded for her to stop, then pulled the sword to the side, the man fell and then she looked for the other men on the roof. The crowd that was once crying for the men to stop were shouting in terror of what was happening. Atoli right hand started glowing a bright red, in her palms a bright light was showing and suddenly it shot into the crowed a very tiny light that then exploded. A massive explosion was caused by that which took most of the city. Gene was flying and could see the sky turn red, he knew this would happen and just kept flying. Gene managed to fly far and decided to land he found himself in the middle of a forest with nothing around him but small animal. He walked for days not wanting to be found by the same people who Atoli had angered. He walked until he heard a soft voice in the distance “~ Shine bright morning light now in the air the spring is coming, sweet blowing wind singing down the hills and valleys, keep your eyes on me, now we’re on the edge of hell, dear my love, sweet morning light, wait for me you’ve gone much farther, to find~”. Gene walked and found a young lady under a tree with her eyes closed enjoying the breeze. Gene spoke softly “ You.. are you the one who sung that beautiful song”. The girl slowly opened her eyes and in a gentle tone said “ the day before yesterday I saw a rabbit, and yesterday a deer, and today you”. The girl stood up and dusted off her white dress “Its a sunny day isn’t it metal man”. Gene silently stared at this girl who he had found in the woods and she looked right back at him but it was different for him it seemed as though she could see right through him. “Young lady what is your name?” The girl slowly pivoted with her hands on her back “ Why would you want to know something like that metal man, there are many people like me around the area why not ask someone else their name”. “Metal man this is not my name, my name is Gene loyal knight of the prince”. The girl turned around and smiled “ Gene now thats a nice name and who is this prince of yours whats his name” Gene froze for a second and slowly spoke “Hamon… That is my prince’s name Hamon”. The girl stood there observing Gene “ Well Gene my name is Rebecca I go to a school around here do you know what a school is?”. Gene replied no, he was unfamiliar with this planet and its customs. Rebecca laughed and ask him if she could show him around. Gene replied with a yes. She then stepped towards Gene and spoke softly “ I don’t know how it is where you come from but this is a very friendly place you don’t need to hide in that armor. Rebecca hands slowly went towards Gene’s helmet, he quickly stepped back. “ I… I do not wish to remove my armor, it’s something personal to me” Rebecca could understand that and agreed not to try it again. Gene wondered why he couldn’t admit the truth to Rebecca. His armor and his personality were crafted by the prince, the prince spent many years crafting a weapon that could destroy nations and came out with Gene and Atoli, the prince had not expected those results. As their creator he ordered them to follow him and follow his orders, they not knowing anything else agreed. Gene continued following Rebecca through the vast woods,They continued till Rebecca, she turned and faced Gene and composed herself and spoke “Gene when you pass this part we will enter a new world where there is people, good people, friendly people, some may be scared but most of them will be happy” Gene took a moment to think about what was going to happen and then he decided he would step out of the woods. “Rebecca I have seen so much on my world so much things you would not understand, it’s time for me to experience something new…The things I see now and hear now will change your planet far more then you know”. Rebecca nodded and grabbed Gene by the hand and smiled “you will see that the sky here is very beautiful”.

Atoli stood there in the rubble of the city, she flew to a large pile and stood there scouting the remains. Their were no remains, the city was destroyed. “Tch, that was pretty annoying, I wonder where Gene flew off too knowing him he went to explore more”. Atoli stood there and looked up to the sky, the brown and black sky disgusted her. “Who would want to live on this planet, the inhabitants here are savages not even worth a few minutes of my time”. Atoli heard a noise and looked up threw the polluted skies she saw a shiny glimmer. The shiny glimmer was a missile something that Atoli didn’t know, something that was not invented on her planet. “What is this sorcery that they have cast do they think this can stop me!” Atoli drew her sword and flew threw the sky “I will see what this planet is truly made of!” She flew up to the sky and slashed the missile… she slashed the missile which caused it to explode.

“Did you hear what happened in Los Angeles, I heard it was reduced to rubble by something”. “I heard it was a terrorist attack, well whatever it is I think the government is going to do something about it well ok, I’ll see you later Josh”. “Ok I’ll see you tomorrow at school”. The sky above was cloudy and it was very windy while Josh walked home. “I wonder what I have to do today, well I don’t really have anything planned maybe I should call someone”. Josh reached his home but something seemed very different then normal on that day. His door was open but he knew his family members were out visiting family outside the country. He saw scratch marks on the floor he walked forward and he found something laying in the corridor something black. Josh approached it very cautiously. “Dont Come any closer you savage!” Josh came a little closer and he saw metal lying on the floor. “Look at what you and your people have done to me! It will take a few hours to fix myself and when I do everyone will see my princes wrath!” Josh stood there looking at the metal at the floor he spoke after awhile “What is your name?” My name is Atoli, loyal knight of the prince Hamon!” Well, Atoli it seems like you’ve had some bad experience with the people from here, I’m here to tell you that not everyone is like that.” “Why should I believe you! Once I get my strength back I’ll show everyone on this planet why they should fear me!” “ Well in the mean time you can stay here I’ll carry you to a bed” “Wait what are you doing put me down! Only my prince my touch me!” “Well I just can’t leave you on the floor can I.” “Why…why are you doing this, everyone else on this planet has just attacked me why have you done this.” “Well theres no really reason you seem hurt and you should rest thats all it seems like I should take care of you.” Atoli looked at this strange man for a second, she didn’t understand this concept of hospitality. She thought back to her prince and the orders he gave her, she slowly clenched her fist and sighed. “Strange man who are you.” The Man spoke “My name for is Josh, if anyone didn’t tell you, your on earth a planet mostly made of water and its inhabitants humans are like me.” “Tell me Josh why have your people been attacking me, why have they treated me like a monster?” “Well I dont know where you’ve been or who’ve you met but not everyone is the same, Tell me Atoli why have you come to our planet?”. Atoli stayed silent for a minute. “Its ok you don’t have to tell me everyone has the right to keep secrets.” Atoli slowly spoke “My… my prince has sent us to scout planets and see the inhabitants.” “Well Atoli you shouldn’t worry about that right now” Josh said with a smile right now your under my care and I won’t let anything happen to you. Atoli now laying in the bed let out a sigh it was the first time since she could remember that she could just not think about the prince and what he wants. Josh looked at Atoli she had fell asleep instantly “wow she must have been tired, I would be too if I had just gone through what she did”. Josh stood up and as he was leaving something caught his eye on Atoli her armor was growing back slowly a red light was coming from the armor fixing itself. “Huh, so this is how it fixes itself, thats interesting at least now I know she’s going to be ok”. Josh went to the living room and started texting his girlfriend “Rebecca I met someone really nice today she was a bit mean in the beginning but I know she was a nice person I hope I get to be better friends with her”. Josh put the phone down and went to check on Atoli her armor was healing really fast and she was snoring Josh laughed to himself and thought “She’s just like a child”. Josh went off to bed wondering what he would do tomorrow, he fell asleep on the couch while waiting for Rebecca’s reply.

“Atoli! Get the guy on your left stab him!” “Ugh!” Atoli woke up and gave a heavy sigh “so much bad dreams even if I don’t have a brain”. She sighed and looked down and saw her legs have reconstructed she stood up on her new legs, she still had a big whole in her torso that was slowly healing. She walked to the living room and saw Josh asleep on the couch, she looked at him for a second and though “Why did this man bring me in, what am I to him”. She reached her hand out to touch Josh’s head but then as she was about to touch his forehead she pulled it back. She went into the room she was staying at and grab the blanket and put it over Josh. She pulled up a chair and then sat down right next to him. He slowly opened his eye’s still half-asleep and looked at Atoli who was right next to him, he smiled and said “Rebecca”. Atoli was looked at him and said “ Yes Josh I’m here” he went and grabbed her hand and feel back asleep snoring softly. Atoli looked at her hand that was now holding Josh’s, she thought back to Hamon and the things he had made her do. She squeezed Josh’s hand and then sighed some more “What have I gotten myself into, I wonder what Gene is doing now probably in more trouble then me”. Atoli slowly drifted off into daydreaming while holdings Josh’s hand and before she knew it she was asleep again.

Atoli woke up and stood up quickly Josh wasn’t there she heard someone in the kitchen and drew her sword. She saw Josh in the kitchen and put her weapon back, “Well good morning sleepy head! You’ve been out for about thirty minutes after I woke up”. Atoli grabbed a seat at the table, “ Are you hungry Atoli I make a good rice pudding”. Atoli looked at him, “I don’t eat, I’ve never eaten food” “Aw Atoli your missing out eating is very nice, you seem like a fruit person to me, well let me see hm a mango your for sure a mango person to me”. “ Well maybe if you say I am I don’t know” Atoli stood up quickly and turned towards the window. “Whats wrong Atoli” Atoli stood there and she looked at Josh “Do you want to come with me Josh” “Wait, go where whats coming Atoli”, Atoli wings flew open “Josh do you want to come with me, you don’t have to if you don’t want to but I might’ve brought you trouble”. Josh stood there thinking of things he would take, where they would go. “Josh its time to choose”. Josh raced off into the living room and grabbed his phone “Yes Atoli I’ll go with you and I think I might have a place to go, theres this school in Santa Cruz we should go there I’ll guide you”. Atoli nodded and grabbed Josh. She walked outside and flew directly into the sky.

“Gene…Gene…Gene! Wake up!” Gene rolled over in the bed and let out a huge yawn and he slowly stood up. “Rebecca don’t you have class today why are you still here?” Well I haven’t heard from Josh in awhile and I’m worried. “Who’s Josh, is he someone special to you?” “He’s my boyfriend Gene, like um my partner don’t you have a partner Gene?” Gene thought for a second he had Atoli as a partner but he thought it wasn’t what Rebecca was saying. “ I have a partner but its, a long story” “Gene look everyone is going outside for something!” Rebecca grabbed Gene’s hand and rushed out she saw something flickering in the sky. Gene stood looked up and he knew it was Atoli, she had found him but something seemed different she was holding something in her hand. “Down there Atoli!”Atoli slowly descended onto the ground “Rebecca!” shouted Josh, “Josh! Is that really you”. Josh ran up and hugged Rebecca “Yes it is I’ve come here with my new friend Atoli”. Gene slowly walked up to Atoli and asked her what had happened when they first landed. She stayed quite “it was nothing I was badly hurt and Josh took me in lets leave it at that.” Gene sighed and placed his hand on Atoli’s shoulder “It’s ok, have you had contact with Hamon by any chance?” Atoli shook her head “No, I have not I think this is going to turn bad really soon I felt something earlier a force that felt like his, Josh wanted to come here though to see this woman.” “Well it was nice of you to do that, huh so he’s coming here isn’t he well this can’t be good.” Atoli nodded suddenly a crowed of people started running into a building, came running “Atoli come quick something is happening on the news.” Gene and Atoli both rushed into the building and saw the television.

“Attention citizens of the world! On this very day on this moment the world shall become mine, your armies will be no match for me so I proclaim this world is mine!”

by oaktheraven 


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